I liked it Idn why you used Ohio is for lovers though but it was a good poem nevertheless 5/5

I cry myself to sleep every night
Trying to get you off my mind

i realy understnad these lines i just lov ur all poem.. tht was gr8 experince to read this.... it relates to me take care 5/5

I cry myself to sleep every night
Trying to get you off my mind

^ I loved those lines. Probably because I can relate so very well. Unfortunately.

The repitition of 'Ohio is for lovers' really brought the poem together, in my opinion.

It flowed well, too.

Greatly penned.

Bri [x]

Hey i liked lol. Some words i still didnt understand SO i looked them up haha. They fit well... good job

I liked it

Excellent love poem
I can relate to this my favorite lines r also I cry myself to sleep everynight
Trying to get you of my mind.

Lol Do you live in Ohio? If you do, you must know the Ohio I live in is NOT for lovers. By the way, you have a nasty habit of copying song titles. I thought it was just for Music of the Night. Then I saw this. Awesome song by Hawthorne Heights. Try to make your own titles. It shows more creativity.

This poem too was a little hard to follow.