Wow, that was actually really good. nice job. you could feel the emotion. 5/5 - Rose

Thank you! =]

No problem. thanks to you to! :)

I really love this poem, it's amazing!! i really want to tell you my favorite part, but i love the whole thing!!! i like how you rhymed it, the rhythm was good, and it flowed really well... i love the topic too, i used to feel like tht (and i still do at certain times)... tht's good that you like writing so much, you're very talented, good luck on your future poems!
5/5

~Sandra

Wow.. Um, this was like.. really really good! It actually made me cry. Which is suprising.. Maybe cos I'm just really emotional , at the moment.. But nonetheless, made me cry. It was just so hearfelt & had so many emotions in it.. It flowed amazingly & the rhymes were great.. Nothing at all seemed forced. I loved the topic, so many people can relate to it... I know I can.

Awesome job, dear.

Bri [x]