Slave

Hmmm...odd..I mean..as opposd to your others i have read..But it was good..I understood the poem and the meaning of it.
Still good though...5/5

Different but very good just the same. Another 5/5

Oh wow. this was odd lol. it was a good poem, just the poem what it's about it weird lol and different. so great job on it! 5/5

~Kristina

Really short, but it is good. I think it could of been alot better if you made it longer. but great job. 5/5

~Chelsea

Hmm, this poem really lacked composition. There was an essence missing in the first few lines of each verse. It consisted of 1 noun, 1 verb, nothing more. This poem seemed really incomplete that way. However, there was a sort of deep meaning to it. Good effort though.