Comments : Sobriety SUCKS

  • 17 years ago

    by Gracie Danielle

    Hey, ive got the rest of chapter 1 posted, ok so read it, yes im pregnant...

  • 17 years ago

    by Francine

    I hope your ok. Strange how reading someone poems can make you feel like you know them, so I've been worried about ya since I haven't got any comments or seen any new stuff from you. Drop me a line so I know your ok.

  • 17 years ago

    by TWiStEDxElAGANCE

    WOW THAT WAS FRiGGEN iNTENSE.... YOU HAVE S0 MUCH Skill.... BUT WHAT i l0VED MOST ABOUT iT iS HOW i CAN PUT MYSElF iN THOSE SHOES, iT MEANS S0MTHiNG TO ME BECAUSE iTS S0O REAl AND S0O TRUE F0R ME

    YOU HAVE A GiFT... kEEP WRiTiNG

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Check out my IAM YOUR DISEASE ANd
    gracie danielle ALMOST AND koriey
    8:11 these are my favorites on this site
    and also jamica < WHEN MY DAYS ARE
    FILLED WITH GLOOM ALL THESE POEMS
    ROCK
    CY

  • 17 years ago

    by winterseve28

    Hey CY - need an update - how are you?

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    5/5 i really like your writing your really good i always check to see if you write new ones i will be waiting :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Strongly worded and the rhetorical questions really made me to think about it. It is well written and well penned. Keep it up 5/5 for sure

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    Very well written and I have been there. I promise you it does get easier it just takes time. Try to stay busy and keep your mind occupied. Good luck and God Bless. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by SHORTY25

    Deep poem. Wow. Theres no other words to describe it