Please promise me

by malina   Mar 18, 2007


Please don't say you'll love me
and then leave
can u keep your promise
please

don't be like the others
who always lie
they are the one
who ends up to ask for one more try

if you're one of them
then don't bother
because this conversation
isn't getting any hotter

all i ask is for you to
keep your promises
just like how you said
we will have our first kiss

i don't want anyone of
us to get hurt
so please don't treat our
love like dirt

i promise to love
you forever
if you want us to
be together

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Another good one, and again using four lines in every stanza, good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Thats really sweet!

    xoxo kisses

  • 17 years ago

    by Rin

    Very nice it flowed very well. Nice job.