Hahah reallly goood, i like how you can be describtive without being fake you know what i mean? ahahha
keep it up i guess hahah but dont be no person everyone comes to you know? :D

ALL YOUR EROTIC POEMS GET ME A STIFFER, LOL, JUS PLAYIN(OR AM I?),GREAT EROTIC POEM, I LOVED THE BEGINNING, MADE WANT TO CALL MY GIRLFRIEND UP, LOL

I think its really well written, very very sensual... love the descriptions... very nice... perhaps you should read my " childs f**k... its pertty good... hmmm.. 5/5
-Marina.

Wow that was intense. i felt like i was there!!!
better go wake up the wife :)