Wow, i hope this isn't your final goodbye...i hope things change for you love. im sorry for your life's problems. although this was horribly sad it still deserves a 5/5

So much hurt and pain in this poem. the description was evident and i hope that the next poem that i read of yours is happy.

well done with this and keep writing. you have some real talent! 5/5 David

This is an amazing poem 5/5

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I am glad you like my poems, I like your too.
This one spoke to me on a personal level. keep up the good work