Quest to Feel

by Romancing the Darker Side   Mar 18, 2007


My arm is cut today
Bring on the pain
Suck the blood of your misery
You still cannot feel

Winds dance a violent swirl
Into your mind
Take the risk of a lifetime
You still cannot feel

Let the razor do your bidding
Onto enemies
And onto friends as your wrists
You still cannot feel

Gates in your mind open
They search
For anything they can find
You still cannot feel

Enter my mind now
Dare to sing
The deadly melody of our sisters
I still cannot feel

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  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Winds dance a violent swirl
    Into your mind
    Take the risk of a lifetime
    You still cannot feel"

    Very poetic language that turns a common subject into something new.
    Nicely done
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Very true, however, to quote Pain by 3 Days Grace, I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all.

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah, don't take it too far love. sometimes it's good when you can't feel. it's better to be numb when life hurts. 5/5

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