Hey, again a really heartfelt read hear. It was full of emotion and this made the poem really great! The rhymeing didnt seem forced and created a nice rhythem and flow. Again many people can relate ot this, and it is quite sad how many people can. ANywyas if you have an MSN, feel free to add me: shamanking1@hotmail.co.uk
Take care, keep writing, i know your pain, but the pain enables you to write excellent poems. Keep them up! xx