Mia's Little Fighter (bullimia)

by CHOKE   Mar 18, 2007


There's too much on my plate
so many varieties of things i can't face
Turn around and I'll make it disappear
Plug your ears

The sounds aren't too pleasing
But it will stop my image's teasing
I'm glad to be hungry; I like the sense of control
SKINNY is my goal

I want to be perfect; and this is the only way
so just sit back and pretend everything is okay
Now my plate is empty; just like me
I'll hide my tears til the day I break free

Don't ask any questions; just pretend you don't know
Excuse me and let me go
And as tomorrow comes; I'll be lighter
Because I'm Mia's little fighter

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  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    What a shockingly real poem! I mean, I liked how you wrote some things that people would be able to imagine, but then left some things a mystery to the reader like the whole 'Mia's little fighter' thing. I was really quite impressed.

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    Great poem, I love the flow and the lines are different lengths but it still sounds really good. And it's really deep and not like cheesy or graphic or over the top or anything.... i like it, 5/5
    - Polly xx

  • 17 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    WOW this poem is great I like it. It flows well and it has good word choices. Your not alone, anyways keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by HE.says.SHE.says

    You have amazing talent. you're a wonderful writer. You capture my attention so well. i love it! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey, wow this poem was really great. And no your not alone, dont worry about that. But i do know thats what an ED makes you feel like. :(
    Anywyas i can really relate to this read, thats what kept me engaged from the begiining till the end. The rhyming didnt seem forced and it all worked really well. The whole poem had a nice rhythem and flow. To improve i suggest you use a more varied punctuation and grammer. But maybe thats just me. Anywyas an excellent read, thank you for your comment, if you need to talk feel freee to PM. Take care xx

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