by Jason Mar 18, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Don't ask me to be good, righteous or true |
by pookiengurgi
Sounds selfish...guess if this is totally about a little bit of water,it's almost true...butbut it seems maybe some of it is a little about something about you......well written,though |
by rene
Written beautifuly and like you said it was like i could see whats happening and thats a sign that its a great poem. |
by Rhiannon
Beautiful. |
A good poem with great imagery, |
by debbylyn
Like what you have written....interesting......especially these lines: |