Like what you have written....interesting......especially these lines:

a pond may be the perfect place for love, beauty and happiness to lie
but truth is in the journey and love, beauty, and happiness are pushed aside

Great metaphors, imagery and flow! Hope to read more from you. All the best, Debbie

A good poem with great imagery,
nessa

Beautiful.
It's a really unique take on the meaning of life.
5/5

Written beautifuly and like you said it was like i could see whats happening and thats a sign that its a great poem.

Sounds selfish...guess if this is totally about a little bit of water,it's almost true...butbut it seems maybe some of it is a little about something about you......well written,though