Moth To A Flame

by Twisted Heart   Mar 18, 2007


You draw me
Like a moth to a flame
Within the light surrounding you
Is where I must remain.

If but for a moment
I can look into your eyes
To see the love that you possess
For this I'd gladly die.

Your touch frees me
Each tender stroke I feel
Gives me such a warm caress
It makes my senses reel.

Your words comfort
Just the sound of your sweet voice
Completely captivates my heart
I stay, I have no choice.

You're a beacon
To this lonely soul that cries
Each moment that we are apart
Is one that dies inside.

So let me fly
In the essence of your light
And if it be the flame that kills me
I'll gladly go tonight.

Just to know
With wings you gave me life
And let me fly inside your love
Surrounded by your light.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cooper

    This is brilliant! So deep, meaningful, worded almost perfectly. The one you wrote about must appreciate this beyond belief.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    It makes me happy and remember better times. i really like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    So let me fly
    In the essence of your light
    And if it be the flame that kills me
    I'll gladly go tonight

    This is what love is about. Wanting one amazing day with it, and dying for it the next..wow.great write!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Wow! That imagery toward the end was sooo good. Your 6th stanza could send shivers down your spine. It was an excellent piece!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "So let me fly
    In the essence of your light
    And if it be the flame that kills me
    I'll gladly go tonight."

    I love how you've used a moth as the intererpretation (sp?) and how it all fits together.
    That stanza was the best by far, how it shows that the love is so strong, it's to die for.
    Your love poems are in a league of thier own!
    5/5
    *Gem*

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