Nicely penned poem.

Just to know
With wings you gave me life
And let me fly inside your love
Surrounded by your light.

I like the last stanza lot.Very heartfelt.

Jeannie this beautifully penned write brings a tear to my eye. And not just because I am an emotional idiot today ... lol

You bring so much life to your poetry that I feel as though I am there watching it all unfold. And I always come away satisfied for your imagery is always amazing.

Wonderfully penned Auntie. It is so clear to see where Holly gets her talent from.
Take care and have a wonderful day!

Jeannie
I stand in awe. This poem is amazing.

So let me fly
In the essence of your light
And if it be the flame that kills me
I'll gladly go tonight

Each and every stanza was amazing.
~Bravo~
Cindy

A very beautiful poem.
Great job.

Jeannie,
I loved this beautiful flow of words. Just like the feelings of love the flow was amazing and breathtaking. It seemed as though the words we know we want to say to express those feelings and you managed to write them in beautiful poetic stanzas. I applaud you on your ability to capture that feeling. I have such trouble writing emotions of happiness and found you done it without flaw and nailed it. I loved every stanza but if I had to choose a favorite it would be this one.

So let me fly
In the essence of your light
And if it be the flame that kills me
I'll gladly go tonight.

Truly amazing gift you have dear. Wonderful Job.
Dixie

"So let me fly
In the essence of your light
And if it be the flame that kills me
I'll gladly go tonight."

I love how you've used a moth as the intererpretation (sp?) and how it all fits together.
That stanza was the best by far, how it shows that the love is so strong, it's to die for.
Your love poems are in a league of thier own!
5/5
*Gem*

Wow! That imagery toward the end was sooo good. Your 6th stanza could send shivers down your spine. It was an excellent piece!
Charisma*

So let me fly
In the essence of your light
And if it be the flame that kills me
I'll gladly go tonight

This is what love is about. Wanting one amazing day with it, and dying for it the next..wow.great write!

It makes me happy and remember better times. i really like it

This is brilliant! So deep, meaningful, worded almost perfectly. The one you wrote about must appreciate this beyond belief.