by Allison Mar 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I'm not the patient kind |
by David
And wait you will have to do. but remember that good things come to those who wait. this was a great poem. |
OMG. omgomgomgomg. |
Wow.. so much emotion, and the flow is awesome, all except for the last line in the 4th stanza, idk, maybe it's just me, but it doesn't seem to fit.. maybe if you reworded it?? The wording everywhere is else is exceptional, and the idea is awesome, I totally know how you feel. It's so difficult to not be seen by the one you love. Awesome write 5/5 |