by Allison Mar 18, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
The boy can't see her |
by David
Another great poem here. i love reading your work. it was very nice to read! always 5/5 from David |
by Colby
Good poem i liked it 5/5 good job, keep it up |
Omg.. YOU HAVE ME ALL TEARY ;[ Lol.. This was so sad. But so very beautifully written. It flowed oh so very nicely & nothing at all seemed forced. I loved the repitition in this, it really brought the poem together [in my opinion]. |
by Kaila
Oh my gosh this was a wonderful write! It was very good! And sad I really wish she would've taken his love lol. I loved this poem though you did an excellent job keep up the good work! 5/5 love always kaila |