Our Mistake

by Rhiannon   Mar 18, 2007


I made a mistake I helped him out I never meant to scream and shout. I didn't know the things he'd done the ride just looked like fun.I never meant to disobey ,I just didn't know what to say. Be fore I knew it I had blew it. I was in the car we didn't get to far ,the red and blue flashing lights behind us he said " Hold on tight babe" then slammed on the gas I knew we were too fast.before I could think I opened the door and jumped. I wasn't very strong I guess I landed wrong. I didn't feel it at first but then a sudden pain burst, it hit like a bullet. The world went black. I woke up two days later, I heard people taking "He-HE didn't make it.So this is Our mistake I found out the car went into a lake.

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