This was beautiful. I loved the strong sense of imagery it created.

Wonderful job. 5/5.

That was gorgeous, it paints a picture, and you can see it so clearly, 5/5
gabriella

Awhh, whats with the low ratingg? This was beautiful. I love the words you used to convey such a beautiful picturee. Loved it 5/5

I love Haiku's and nature poems, so this poem is great for me! Lol. Haiku's are so short and yet have wonderful imagery, nature poems go excellently with them as they also have amazing imagery. Anyways this poem did not disapoint me. This poem creates this soft peacefulness around it, it makes the reader feel at peace. The imagery was great as you can see this image in the minds eye. i really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing. xx