Hey,
This reminds me of the last poem i wrote. The one called "Can i do this". It was a really heartfelt and sad read. The flow works quite well, the rhymes arent forced and i liek this about it. The vocabulary was good, i can relate to this poem, and i was engaged from the first line. Mna it hurts me to know how many people could relate to this poem. :( ANywyas ive got windowslive messenger, im sure you can talk ot people from Yahoo with that. Try adding me? Take care great read. xx

Oh and by the way i noticed that you used more punctuation. Yeah i really liked that about it. Its improved the poem a great deal! Keep it up! :)

Oh, this is always a touchy subject with me. I wish Ana wouldn't overcome most lives of innocent young girls, it always hurts me to see such, on a more personal level, i hope you don't let her win. Keep writing, it was amazing.

Oh, this is always a touchy subject with me. I wish Ana wouldn't overcome most lives of innocent young girls, it always hurts me to see such, on a more personal level, i hope you don't let her win. Keep writing, it was amazing.

I love this poem. you are so talented! and you write about real things. i love how this is a battle between you and bulimia, and you openly admit it. 5/5 times a kajillion. keep up the great work. you're my role model!!!!

Im here for you if you ever need to talk babe. im just so awestruck i can't get over the fact that you write so well. i wish i could rate this poem 100 more times but i cant. but you get the point, i love this poem!!!

Im here for you if you ever need to talk babe. im just so awestruck i can't get over the fact that you write so well. i wish i could rate this poem 100 more times but i cant. but you get the point, i love this poem!!!

Im here for you if you ever need to talk babe. im just so awestruck i can't get over the fact that you write so well. i wish i could rate this poem 100 more times but i cant. but you get the point, i love this poem!!!

Hey chick I've read this poem like 5 times in the past hour. it's so amazing :D

You're talented don't let anyone ever tell you different sweetheart <3

Yeah i'm a pretty troubled person, but I'm glad you're still talkin to me anyway. good luck with future poems babe!

Good poem i loved it and thank u for commentin on my poem

How very sad but with your writing about this subject I think you will help others. Great job on the poem.

I want to be perfect...
Beyond all regret!
I strive to be thin,
What can i say; I lose Ana wins...

I hope you start to win soon.
Take Care Cindy

:] Hello.

Very well worded peom. It was so intense and it sounds alot like me. excpet I don't eat.

AWESOME POEM...thanks....i got it...just gotta see if im in or not i guess...do you have msn?

I don't have ed but I think this is very well written. nice flow, well pinned 5/5

Wow, tis reminded me of when I was belemic, it's an awsome poem, full of emotion, and its so inspiring, I love it....

This is very stunning.
I have anorexia and I connect with every word.

Please remember that you are beautiful.