Excellent writing! I love the imagery.

The grass curls around me
As I slip to the ground

^ That is beautiful and expressive.

You're not capable of writing a bad poem are you?...*envious*... I feel like I slip back to the darkness everynight, when I am alone with no one to support me.

You used a couple of big words that I didnt know, but ive got a dictionary. all is well. But anyway, twas brilliant darlin. Loved it.

Wow, kinda dark and mysterious, ehh? I don't have any critique, only praise for this one. 5/5 Lovely.