This poem is truly wonderful. I have several (crappy) poems about listening, similar to this one. A line from one of my poems is, "learn to read people's hearts, and not their faces." <--Something like that. You capture the same idea. Good writing.

Your descriptions of the world are the same as mine, The world has a lot of suffering it in, and we go through are daily lifes acting like everything is ok, we pretend to be happy, we act like everything is just great, but inside we slowly tear ourselfs apart. Very well writen poem though.

This is a nice insightful poem. i liked the flow to it. it reall ran off the tongue. good work

Love is the law, love under will.
Rocky

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww truth.... gr8 work i lovd ur poem take care. honey

You think mine flowed well, read your own!
this is by far one of he best peieces of poetry i have read!
you have a true talent as you can relate to it. And it really makes you hink!
Thank youfor writing such awsm stuff!