by Wasted Fake Smiles Mar 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You were the one to talk to when I was in need, |
by CHOKE
As we grow we realize that their are a lot of fake loves. As you progress through life you will endure a lot of pain from heartbreaks. But you must keep your heart open, because you never know what could be...anyway, it was a good poem; in my opinion it lacked depth. Go more into it next time; with more details and emotions maybe along with scenery. anyway 4/5 love. |