Comments : Wipe My Teary Eyes

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    As we grow we realize that their are a lot of fake loves. As you progress through life you will endure a lot of pain from heartbreaks. But you must keep your heart open, because you never know what could be...anyway, it was a good poem; in my opinion it lacked depth. Go more into it next time; with more details and emotions maybe along with scenery. anyway 4/5 love.