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by aisyned Mar 18, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / fantasy, mystical
Thunder crashing down, right against my heart, two sides of my heart, pulling so far apart, rain drops, falling from my eyes, why can't people, stop telling lies, flooding, I'm drowning in sadness, why can't anybody see, i am a mess, lighting striking my love, my home is destroying me, but my pain, people can't see, my heart, freezing in time, let it all out, in this pathetic rhyme, what has happened, to change my life, why does everything, turn out to be a strife, i was winning, life's stupid game, then i lost, and now i am filled up with shame, head hung low, no one to turn to, who will help, i don't know where to go, you all don't care, no one does, he'd i change, from what i was, love!! destroyed this girl, love!! crashed her world, love!! broke her heart, love!! now she is falling apart, no one can save her, many have tried, now that she is dying, he is satisfied, the devil has won, god lost her soul, the devil all of her misery, but all god saw was a big black hole, the devil won, defeated god in how own game, now god must, hang his head in shame, love!! the devil controls it, love!! it makes you feel like Sh**!
by CHOKE
Amazing choice of words; they flowed together so well. 5/5