Your in a better place
by XTaintedxBeautyX Mar 18, 2007
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Far upon the gazing sky,their is an angel, crying and knowing the end is near. Hoping everything will get better, the angel watches over the living ones who he once loved watching over them as they live their lives. That lost feeling on the inside, dying on the out, crying for help, the screams to silent to be heard. The love of others not known, the pain of them to great for them to handle, showing their emotions by weeping their sorrows away, not remember the good times they once had. |
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17 years ago
by CHOKE
And in the title your should be you're...i think im on a grammar frenzy today....you can tell me all about how i can't spell too; i don't mind.
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17 years ago
by CHOKE
Angle was meant to be angel* lol i told you i make mistakes
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17 years ago
by CHOKE
Great write. artistic much. although there were a few grammar mistakes as there are in most poems (even mine) i think angle was meant to be angle and i think maybe lose was meant to be lost. anyway, your poem, in my opinion, lacked depth. I felt that you were holding back something. Don't do that; Give it your all! anyway overall 4/5...your well on your way to being a great poet.
