Too Many Times

by Natalie McPhee   Mar 18, 2007


If I asked you a question?
Would you give me the answer?
To this pain inside,
Just like cancer.

Are you the one?
Would you hold me tight?
Or will you add to my scars
I didn't really think, men were from mars

Do I stay outside?
Or would you let me in?
I'm banging on your window
Letting all my tears flow

Will I have to let you go?
Just walk away,
I've lost all I had inside,
Too many times I've cried.

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  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    This poem flows a lot better from the previous one i read. To make it more interesting you should use capturing words. Some of the rhymes still seemed a tad forced, but overall i'd give it a 4.5; but there isn't a 4.5 on the scale so i'll go ahead and give you a 5. keep up the good work :D

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