My Obsession

by BlueEyedMystery   Mar 18, 2007


I know every little thing about him,
I have him completely memorized,
From the way he hates to argue,
To his beautiful chocolate eyes.

He stays loyal to his true friends,
His love for his mother shines,
His caring personality never ends.
The love in his heart never dies.

He would tell whoever wanted to know,
That he has someone special to love,
His love for her will continue to grow.
Until it's greater than the sky above.

I'm obsessed in a wonderful way,
I don't want this obsession to end,
I'm going to be with him everyday,
My love for him will never bend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I thought this poem was adorable : ) you pointed out the small things and thats what was so cute!

    I'm obsessed in a wonderful way,
    I don't this obsession to end,
    I'm going to be with him everyday,
    My love for him will never bend.
    ^^you need to put a "want" between the don't and this in the second line !

    anyway great poem! 5/5 <33

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    This one is just great! I love it!

    The rhyming is absolutely wonderfully done.. :)

    Very good job! 6/5

    Keep it up!
    &&Take care

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