This one is just great! I love it!

The rhyming is absolutely wonderfully done.. :)

Very good job! 6/5

Keep it up!
&&Take care

I thought this poem was adorable : ) you pointed out the small things and thats what was so cute!

I'm obsessed in a wonderful way,
I don't this obsession to end,
I'm going to be with him everyday,
My love for him will never bend.
^^you need to put a "want" between the don't and this in the second line !

anyway great poem! 5/5 <33