Forever Dreaming [Ottava Rima]

by aDORKable x3   Mar 18, 2007


I'm forever stuck dreaming you'd be here,
But I'm lost in my memories of you.
I just want you to come back and stay near.
No one understands that my love is true.
You told me one I would have nothing to fear,
But now, without you, what can I really do?
So in my dreams, you can't hear the screaming.
Cause it seems I'll be stuck Forever Dreaming.

Ottava Rima
An Ottava Rima is a poem written in 8-line octaves. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in the following rhyme: abababcc

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  • Another wonderful poem. The flow was excellent and a lot of emotion was in it. Welcome to my favourites.
    Keep it up 5/5

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