by CHOKE
Your words flow together so well. This was an interesting piece; and i enjoyed reading it 5/5 love. |
by debbylyn
Reminds me of Ben Thompson's poems......very dark.... |
Oh Cindy, |
by Lu
Grey fog you can't fight through |
Sad but yet so different |
by Lithium
Your imagery is really well done here a sad piece that reminds me of myself, and some what the words you write sounds so much like myself again, i really feel part of what your going through and i wish i coudl help you in some way, peace be with you honey *hugs* xox sam |
by chavii
The poem has such great depth and sadness, as if your soul itself is speaking aloud. |
So much emotion and feeling in this one. Sad but nicely expressed. |
by Gone Forever
Man i wish that all the pain goes away or that i can take it away from you. Your poem is very deep and good.Great Job!!! |
by Sarah
This is an amazing poem Cindy, but then again, you are an amazing poet! |
by jackie
You are such a talented writer 5/5 keep em comin |
by David
Well done on this! the poem structure was wat i loved the most! |
by Ben Pickard
A very powerful and emotional write. Excellent |