Comments : Consumed By Sadness

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Your words flow together so well. This was an interesting piece; and i enjoyed reading it 5/5 love.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Reminds me of Ben Thompson's poems......very dark....

    In the depths of an unforgiving sea
    As an anchor dragging me down
    Never again to see the light of day
    Echoing screams the only sound

    Perfect description of depression. Cindy, hope you feel better soon....Love, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Oh Cindy,

    "In the depths of an unforgiving sea
    As an anchor dragging me down
    Never again to see the light of day
    Echoing screams the only sound"

    A true definition of what sadness is and what it can do to you. A trully emotional write, dear friend. I feel the depth of this. The pull, the anguish, the pain.

    Great Job.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Grey fog you can't fight through
    Dark clouds linger above me
    Body struggling just to stay awake
    Eyes slowly closing, so I can't see
    ^^^
    Oh how I can relate, my dear friend.
    To feel one is not alone in these feelings somehow makes it a little more
    bearable ....
    You have poured much emotion into this write Cindy, heart touching!

    Take care deary
    Luanne

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Sad but yet so different

    In the depths of an unforgiving sea
    As an anchor dragging me down
    Never again to see the light of day
    Echoing screams the only sound

    Somehow it seems as if i hv never read anything like this from u before, the way u expressed in this one is so unique and its just crosses ur heart.

    I just wish i could be helpful.

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Your imagery is really well done here a sad piece that reminds me of myself, and some what the words you write sounds so much like myself again, i really feel part of what your going through and i wish i coudl help you in some way, peace be with you honey *hugs* xox sam

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    The poem has such great depth and sadness, as if your soul itself is speaking aloud.
    Very nicelly penned, beautiful flow.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    So much emotion and feeling in this one. Sad but nicely expressed.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gone Forever

    Man i wish that all the pain goes away or that i can take it away from you. Your poem is very deep and good.Great Job!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is an amazing poem Cindy, but then again, you are an amazing poet!

    take care, Sarah xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by jackie

    You are such a talented writer 5/5 keep em comin

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well done on this! the poem structure was wat i loved the most!

    5/5 David

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very powerful and emotional write. Excellent