by Jessica Mar 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
.when I'm alone i think about you. and when i think about you I'm not so alone. the feelings you give my body are indescribable.the first day you looked into my eyes and i looked into yours i became breathless. you took the breath rite out of me. i never lost those feelings. every time i see you. my breathing becomes harder. i need to stop and look away to breath normal again. i wonder if i give you these same feelings. did i take the breath out of you the moment we caught each others eyes? did you die ail inside? and in order to feel whole again do you need me? i know i need you. even tho you make it hard for me to breath i know i will die if you walk away. your the only one that kills me and keeps me alive at the same time.♥ |
I think that it is sad that people only rated this poem a 3.7 because this little piece of poetry is filled with incredible emotion. well i don't know if its just because i can REALLY relate or what, but i think that this is a really great poem! i give it a 5/5! |
by Lalalalaura
I like it alot... I can feel what your feeling and that the point of a poem to try to get other people to feel what you were feeling when you wrote it. |
by DeSiReE
That was long but sooo worth it...:) it's very good!!!!! |
by CHRISANN
Cute, sweet, very emotional i love it |