Broken Heart

by UnToLd TrUtH   Mar 19, 2007


She stares at herself thinking of what is wrong. Why doesn't he like her. Why does he say those things? Are her friends better then herself?

It seems all this girl is good for is getting used as pawn for his gain and his want. Using her to get to her friends, thinking as long as she's included she wouldn't notice what he was doing.

Her friends say nothing will become of this. They say they would never go out with him because they alone know her feelings for this boy.

But they don't know how it feels to be used, to be discarded without a glance. For them its so easy, guys just come for them. They don't know what its like to feel and to be unwanted. To cry themselves to sleep every night.

For this boy she would do anything just for him to look at her like he looks at her friends. But she stays silent. Releasing her pain with a bloody kiss on her wrist. Knowing this heart of hers will never mend.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Absolutely brilliant.. vry deep n full ov meaning.. this kind ov thing happenz so much.. it isnt a great feeling at all n u hav expressed it vry well..

    5/5

    .x

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    I'll admit. Not the best poem.
    It was just a mess to me. I think you should
    just keep your stanzas the same lines and same use of words as possible. The flow wsa pretty rocky. Was good but not the best. God Bless 4/5
    <3Tay

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    I liked this poem, so so much. I just got over a guy. lol and I thought it would take a long while. ohh it did. but than I realized something and I don't like him anymore. I guess it's something you have to hit head on and just go for what you want. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Beautiful! so true. i can relate!

    But she stays silent. Releasing her pain with a bloody kiss on her wrist.

    i love those lines! they are so true!

    xo kisses xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    It was a pretty good poem. It didn't really flow that well. It was more of a meaningful poem with a message in it. There were some good lines in this one, but nothing amazing. I'll give you a 5 because I'm nice, but it really does deserve a 4 :(

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