This was really good, but very sad 5/5

I love this one!..
6,5,4,3,2,1.. really good, nice done..
sad, but beautiful.

This was beautiful, its so sad, and you write your feeling perfectly, 5/5
gabriella

That was such a great poem!
But so very sad!
Very Touching.Nicely Done xD
5/5

Take Care x

Enjoyed reading this....very well done. 6,5,4,3,2,1, like it! All the best, Debbie

Great working aropund of the stanzas loving it!
sill depressing but i know ull cheer up cos ur too good to leave yaself on the ground :P

Wow David.... so emotional.. I know I say that alot, but your poems are always so emotional.. which is really good!! The flow and wording is spectuaular as usual my friend. Awesome job as always 5/5
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Uniquely put! 5/5

Oh wow that ending...it brought tears to my eyes.
It was so beautiful.
I thought the flow in this was flawless and I enjoyed the wording.
Yet another wonderful write.