Excellent - I love how you write poetry in various styles. It's always a pleasure to read.

Gem
This is a really great poem. I loved your first stanza.

Despite being the perfect guy
I guess this time it is goodbye
There's times when love has had its run
A gray cloud covers up the sun

Excellent!
Love your friend Cindy

Wonderful poem .I like the style of writing very much.
The footnote is very informative , thanks.

Well Gem, You are a true talent. I love the many styles you use when writing. My daughter and I used to sit and write poems in different styles as a practice. Since she suffers from writer's block and can't seem to put two lines together successfully [her words, not mine], I have quit doing the exercises. Each of your different styles flow with ease. It's like they come naturally to your mind and through your pen.

Well done, as usual.

Always,
Jeannie

Its funny how how sometimes beign everything she dreamed of is too much :( another great poem Gem :) 99/5

Wow i like this and thats cool i never heard anything about that thing you wrote at the bottom. well this is good 5/5

I love it. The foot note was helpful, thanks. 5/5

Ahaaaaa. what a poem. what a flow of words!!! i impressed. good work dear. take care

Oh I do love this form and you did an excellent job as usual!

Hey hun great poem and good use of words keep em coming xx