When I'm Gone

by Gem   Mar 19, 2007


When I'm gone will you miss the way
I stroked your hair at night?
Will you miss the way I held your hand
And gripped your fingers tight

When I'm gone will you miss all
The little things we share?
The inside jokes and comfy nights
Will it be too much to bear?

When I'm gone will you miss how
I used to kiss your lips
The way I'd pull you close to me
With my hands upon your hips?

When I'm gone will you miss "us"
And the relationship we had?
All the memories we shared
Will you miss them like mad?

When I'm gone will you miss me
And the love we had together?
Cos you know I'll miss you just as much
And I'd wait for you forever ©

A poem co-written with my gorgeous fiance, Marcus x

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  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Amazing poem I am so happy for u that u have found that some1 special and u can share your writing with them some 1 to do that with is a rare find congrats

  • 17 years ago

    by Whittney

    Hey , im sure you get a bunch of comments on this poem but i just wanted to say that its an amazing poem and your a really good writer, i love all of your work. keep it up! if u get a chance, check out some of mine. thanx
    ~Whittney~

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, a very beautiul poem! I just love it. It is great and wonderful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimberly Anne

    Wow. This is a very sensual poem. I loved reading it. Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    When I'm gone will you miss me
    And the love we had together?

    you love is two sided. so definitely she will miss you alot.. you showd the example of gr8 love take care