Wow, i can relate to this, every time i walk into a cemetery, this is exactly what i am wondering about, and it flows perfectly, the rhyme was amazing as well, 5/5
gabriella

Great poem mostly because the flow it has it's perfect and the message so real, it hurts. great work

At first I thought it was a poem about ending relationships but then I realised it was about death. Either way it's good. It rhymes well, it's been thought through and it's no childish attempt. Nice work x

This is one of my favorites from you Silence.. it's so sad and I can relate to it in so many ways. I've asked myself those questions and have wondered those same things. My best friend Nathan died in a car accident almost a year ago and I thought those same thoughts about him... life sucks. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~