It was a beautiful write. a great read :D and this topic especially appeals to me as i am suffering with the same E.D. 5/5 love.

well whenever im on here i click the "submit poem" link thing and i just start typing what i feel. i don't pre-write my poems, it's just whatever i feel at that moment, or whatever i feel like writing about.

I don't know why, but the rhythm of this poem seemed really calm. i breathed with everyline and it only added to the emotional write.
"I knelt:
Behind closed doors,
Tap was running
I was down on all fours."

the pause needed after the line 'I Knelt' made the poem a lot more dramatic and separates your writing from the mediocre recycled words that pollute this website, to something entirely honest and beautiful.
i'm very much surprised, because the stigma attached to poems about eating disorders is very negative. i really enjoyed this.x

Awh this is real sad:[ but amazinly written. you are such a good writer. i gave this poem a 5.

Obviesly you've had or have an eating disorder(or maybe someone close to you). you wouldn't have been able to give so much insight into it otherwise. good poem. not excelent but i was writing even worse ones at your age. you've got some talent. my only advice it to practice and wright what feels right to you

Love is the law, Love under will
Rocky

Amazing hun. I love it. I suffer from anorexia but I do have experience as an ana mia, and I think this portrays my thoughts perfectly. Job Well Done. :]