Seemingly Sweet (Haiku)

by Simple Sensation   Mar 19, 2007


Hey all,
this is my first try at writing a Haiku so hope you all like it, and tell me what you think please.

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Delicate petals
Seemingly sweet. Yet the thorns
Prick, and crimson leaves

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rocky

    I liked the juxtoposition of the beaytiful rose with the thornsand how the leaves are crimson with blood. maybe is a good metaphor for love. those who reach for its beauty are wounded and left to bleed

    Love is the law. love under will
    Rocky

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this is really short but i like it because it has a really good point to it. i gave it a 4! keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I'm not a big fan of Haiku's in all honesty. i think they're usually overly structured and make the writer lose touch on what their intention was. however, this was really well written and the description left a lot to the imagination. very good write.x

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