Within A wall

by TaTy   Apr 9, 2004


Thanks for helping me with the title Jesse...loved the idea. =)

My feelings hide within a wall,
berried deep inside this call,
where i scream and plea
for you to come,
and rescue me from this undying love.

I can't see me with out you,
you hold my world in your hands,
and come to me only when you see my glance.

You told me you loved me,
and then you broke my heart,
then you turned around,
and said you never wanted to part.

What am I supposed to think?
How am I supposed to feel?
Do I believe what others tell me,
or is your love for real?

Time can only tell,
if you are meant for me,
but the wall i built broke the day you entered me.

Now I wait for your return,
so I can look into your eyes,
but please don't lie,
Will you love me for all eternity,
or will our love die?

Kristin Nicole

-please vote and comment it means a lot to me, thank you.

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  • 20 years ago

    by alexandra

    hey~u commented on one of my poemss... and i think this one is almost based on the same thing that one poem i wrote is!
    i wrote mine when things got tough with my boyfriendd.. but right now- things are greatt.. couldnt get better..
    so if this really is happening- it'll get better~ ;) keep writing! ur good!

  • 20 years ago

    by TaTy

    Thanks to everyone who commented...it means a lot to me. Thanks for the suggestions mary and jesse. I went with within a wall...first verse and I didn't even think about it. Thanks again everyone... =)

  • 20 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Hey Kristin. A great poem you got here. You expressed yourself clearly in this piece. Hope things will soon turn out for the better. You have great talent. Keep up the excellent work. By the way, thank you for commenting on my latest poem. I really appreciate it. Take care.
    Kristina

  • 20 years ago

    by Mary

    You know I love all your poems ;) And I love this one! Keep up the great writing. As for a title maybe "What Am i Suppossed to Feel?" I just liked that line alot in the poem. Its just a suggestion. And its great even without a title so dont worry about it to much!

  • 20 years ago

    by TaTy

    Ok big help...thanks..lol...j/k maybe someone will help......... =o)

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