by Francine Mar 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
(old poem, dated July 23, 1996) |
This does have a nice flow and an emotionally inspring idea but i give you that extra point from a 4 to a 5 for your rythmn scheme (aab - ccb - dde - ffe - ggh - iih) |
by moonlil
Loved your poem. It is very nice. |