Remember

by Francine   Mar 19, 2007


(old poem, dated July 23, 1996)

When you feel so alone,
like there's nobody home,
Remember, I'll be there.

When you just want to give up,
because it hurts so much,
Remember that I care.

When life gets you down,
and there's no one around,
Remember, that you are mine.

I know it's not fair
that you have to be there
Remember, it's just a matter of time.

And soon you'll be here
And we can be near
Remember that to get you through.

Because no matter how late,
I will always wait
Remember, that I love you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    This does have a nice flow and an emotionally inspring idea but i give you that extra point from a 4 to a 5 for your rythmn scheme (aab - ccb - dde - ffe - ggh - iih)

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Loved your poem. It is very nice.