by Francine Mar 19, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
(September 1996) |
by CY GINDLE
Nice job i sure you dad cried when he read |
Very beautiful story.... try to expand more on your feelings and attachment to the mn you call your dad |
Awww how sweet i like this. it has a great ending and a good beginning. great poem 5/5 |