I liked the first part very much, it creates a mysterial picture in my mind, I could really see the tears for my eyes.

Wishing for wings, so she did not have to stay.
This was a great line, often used probably but almost never misses her effect

Be carefull though that you keep writing this good because at the end of you poem your writing got a bit weaker. I know that that's almost inevadable but maybe you could look at this again.

In general a very good poem that struck my eye

This was beautifully written, it had great imagery, and they flow was smooth. It seems like you were saying that sadness can't always be stopped or avoided, which in reality it can't. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson