Wow that was amazing stuff a very lovely rhyme i really enjoy ur style its very refreshing keep it up

melissa

Its what everygirl i know whants great poem.

mandy xx

OMG! this was soo sweet....i like it when u said that u want some one that will love you for being YOU, and i think that is sooo true....

and i think its what we ultimatly look for, beside love ofcourse..

anyways this was really sweet, and i absolutly loved it!

<3 Aly

Cute!
This is a very clever poem with all the ryhming and the fantastic flow! I love it! and give it a huge.. 5/5
good job

Awww.. this is very beautiful from beginning to end. i want a guy that would love me for me and wouldnt want to change me not one bit. hehe i love it. and a gurl too. hmm.. well it truly a wonderful poem u have writen here. i love it. =) 5/5

TaKe CaRe,
frenchy

This is so simple, but so amazingly written. Flowed well and ur rhyme scheme was excellently done. This is beautiful. Very sweet. From what ive read you really have the voice for the love poetry. You write it so well. If that even makes sense? lol sorry. Anyways, nice work. 5/5

This is truly beautiful. Everyone needs happiness and I think you've truly found it. Perfect in every way, you have a beautiful way with words. 5/5, Em