Comments : All the problems that I have

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    I'm standing on the line
    Between the death and the alive

    how sad this is....... i loved your poem a tear came from my eyes. it relates to me... nice job. your work is great. i am adding you in my favourites. take care and 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Eternal

    Excellent, just superb. the total poem is poetically and lexically strong. Keep it up.:-)