Great poem love,
it was a little awkward because at the beginning i assumed you were depressed but in the end you weren't??? i think? lol sorry im a tad not here right now love. anyway 5/5.

I love how you put a positive spin on having a broken heart. I know personally when I write heartbreak poem they're all about how miserable and hurt I am. You did such a great job with this. Keep up the great work.
5/5
Left_2_Die
Ps. thanks for voting on mine.

A really great poem. i really like your style and the way you layout your poems is really interesting and unique. a great and inspiring write! thankyou! xXx

This was an inspirational piece. I like the message you're sending out in this. I just hope people can actually grasp it and learn from it. The form it was written in kinda threw me off a bit. Maybe breaking it into stanzas would help, but that's just one person's opinion. Besides that, the poem was great. Enjoyed reading it. Keep writing! Take care.

` Liz.

Its been 4 months n im still waiting for that liveliness to return, ty for the comment

Catchy and has plenty of potential!

All of the above

It was really good. thanks for commenting on mine.

Excellent poem, a great picker upper (not the bounty commercial lol) Anyways, keep writing!!