Ana, You Are The Perfect Disease

by CHOKE   Mar 19, 2007


I skipped breakfast and lunch, but I ate a little something for dinner...
Ana please forgive me I know this won't help me get thinner.
But you see, I'm going through a crisis...
And things just get so hard that I forget.
Next time I eat, I hope I start chokin'.
I know I made you a promise; I'm sorry it's been broken.

I should listen to Mia, and walk into the bathroom,
I should make some room and get rid of this food.
I'm sorry I'm a disaster;
But I have a disease, and only I have the cure...

Forgive me for my mistakes,
I'll be thin; I'll do whatever it takes.
Don't you worry Ana, before long you will see my bones.
I know you're with me, I'm not on my own :D

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  • 17 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    That is perfection <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Swiss1804

    Better poem than the newer one, more emotions. hope youll get through that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    An excellently written poem. Thank you for your comment, and oyu jsut write in the heat of the moment? Wow thats so cool, i cant do that. I allways pre write my poems and then submit them lol.
    Anywyas your poem was really emotional and displayed anorexia in a really sad yet true way. The ending seemed kinda pro ana, and as im not pro ana my emotions kinda threw me off the poem. But forgtetting my emotions the poem had a really steady flow and the rhymes didnt seem forced. So an enjoyable read keep writing! Take care xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great Work
    This poem had a very good flow
    =-)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great Work
    This poem had a very good flow
    =-)
    5/5

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