How interesting the way you relate the food to your emotions. I liked it it made me laugh a little. 5/5 perhaps you can read one of mine.

Great Work
This poem had a very good flow
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5/5

Great Work
This poem had a very good flow
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5/5

An excellently written poem. Thank you for your comment, and oyu jsut write in the heat of the moment? Wow thats so cool, i cant do that. I allways pre write my poems and then submit them lol.
Anywyas your poem was really emotional and displayed anorexia in a really sad yet true way. The ending seemed kinda pro ana, and as im not pro ana my emotions kinda threw me off the poem. But forgtetting my emotions the poem had a really steady flow and the rhymes didnt seem forced. So an enjoyable read keep writing! Take care xx

Better poem than the newer one, more emotions. hope youll get through that.

That is perfection <33