How interesting i can relate to this poem a little i liked it 5/5 perhaps you can read one of mine

Nicely written not a topic many people write about very interesting good job.

This is beautiful poem u r right it is on the same lines as mine. Thanks for your comment on "Inner Beauty"

Anotha wel nice poem. ur a rly talentd 15 yr old!

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Wow girl you really do have talent! This is another wonderful, beautiful poem, I'm adding this one also to my favorites. You words are very inspirational, and I feel a little better reading this, this poem is a realy spirit lifter.

Hey hun,
Thank you for your comment, its much appreciated!
Anyways this poem... was amazing. I loved your repitition of "You dreamed you were an angel", especially in the first stanza, becuase your words drew me in, the flow was really good, and worked really well. I liked how each stanza symbolised a sifferent side, like the first stanza was her dreaming she was an angel, the secound was her thinking she wasnt and then the final stanza was how she acctually was an angal in your eyes. It was really excellent! Your rhyming was good and didnt seemed forced. Overall it was a really amazing read! Keep it up! xx

Excellent word choice

Excellent poem... very beautiful... the last stanza is amazing and the concept behind is great...

great work...

You only dreamed you were an angel,
But when I look at you I see,
I see an angel staring back,

that's dope i dig keep it up