Interesting i liked it cause it hits how i some times think exallent work

Well i liked it more than the member b4. i gave you a 5/5, like always. this poem was written perfectly.

5/5 david

It's very dark but the way it was written is very good. I like it. 5/5

Wow, love the layout and and the rhyming of:

white roses
red rainfall
no more poses
no more crap from you Neanderthals

the ending was great and that is one of the best poems i've ever read. 5/5 keep writing.

x

Wow. i love this. deep, powerful, emotional and very good flow.

Broken and battered
torn and tattered
blade rising
time flying

^ love the opening. very powerful

--aprilsconspiracy

Oh my, this poem is amazing. Emotion runs abound and it is so strong. Description and imagery take turns unfolding a short movie clip of this. Anyone reading this will be able to step in your shoes for a moment. I think that this piece is terrific and you have penned something absolutely amazing.