Comments : Hold Me For All Time

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Even your little poems are great and shows that it has written by a great and talented poet.
    I really enjoy reading your poems as all of your poems are so far at 5/5 level.

    take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Great start to the poem. I liked the rhymes and the flow was good. This is every girl's dream I would think. Good job on this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww this was simply adorable not many complicated words to confuse me so thats good lol
    I loved it